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Just your room, just your bed.
Where you slept, where you bled.
Another memory strikes again,
A reminiscent streak of pain.
Your home is merely a mourning tomb.
A mourning flowers fill your room.
Posters smile down from your purple walls,
You were the only one who called at all.

You left me here, alone.
Youre flying high, Im on my own.
The note is all you left behind,
Its dying words still cloud my mind.
The ghost of you still haunts this place,
Water still streams down my face,
I cannot stop the tears,
And emptiness burns my ears.
Alone, I sit here on my own,
With just a Dial Tone.

Where you laughed, where you cried,
Where I stood silently at your side.
Another day, another knife,
Another useless, wasted life.
Your bed still warm from where you lay,
I was with you on that dreadful day.
I saw no sign, no clue,
Of what your mind was running through.
You said youd ring, You said youd call.
But you never called at all.
The rain falls like tears on your windowsill.
Everything is still.
Youre there out in the bleary sky,
You left me here to wonder why.
Left me here to mourn, alone,
With just a Dial Tone.

Here I am, Here I lie.
With someone else to watch me cry.
"Talk to someone, on whom you depend".
You were my only friend.
I still remember those days,
You'd call, You'd come, You'd stay.
Now there are just closed doors.
And I've nowhere else to go.
So I still ring your phone,
To no answer, Just a tone.
The note still clutched tightly in my hand.
I wish that I could understand.
I've no phone calls.
You were the only one who called at all.
You left me here alone,
With just a Dial Tone.
©2008-2009 ~Astarael7
:iconastarael7:

Author's Comments

Bear with me on this one.

I wrote it in.... 2004.

I was 14.

I found it in an old diary, and I just had to post it.

Mainly to remind myself that I need to start writing again.

This was written because I was a typical emo teenager who needed to remind herself that If she were to commit suicide, there would be someone who missed her. Just like the girl who died, who didnt know she would be leaving someone behind.





PS. Ty Richard for pointing out a typo ^.^

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:iconspikepheratu:
wow
i really like that poem
found some of the lines to be extremely powerful
i can also relate to it almost line for line
i think u really should start writing again :)
:iconastarael7:
Thank you so much for your nice comments ^.^

Makes me wanna start writing again even more :)

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~I died inside my own head, and I'd die again, for you~
:iconastarael7:
And thanks for the favourite!

Youre too kind

:)

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~I died inside my own head, and I'd die again, for you~
:iconfoligno:
! ALERT !

Typo Miss. Astarael! :P

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Foligno
:iconastarael7:
Typo disaster averted Agent Foligno

*salutes*

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~I died inside my own head, and I'd die again, for you~

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